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  "title": "Who decides when Jones leaves prison?",
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      "exact": "I wish Jones to go to gaol and Brown to say when Jones shall come out",
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  "body_markdown": "The plain-language substitution turns a promise of scientific improvement into a question about power: who judges when another person has become fit for liberty? ‘Indeterminate’ concerned the duration of imprisonment, not uncertainty about guilt. Charles Dudley Warner’s advocacy offers a particularly revealing comparison. He distinguished release within a statutory maximum from an entirely unlimited commitment, which alone he called genuinely indeterminate. In his preferred system, the judge would establish guilt and then hand the offender over to experts; confinement could continue for life if reform failed. Warner presented this as protection and rehabilitation, comparing it with hospital treatment and custody of the insane. His position therefore supplies a real counterpart to the authority Chesterton’s invented Brown exercises, although there is no evidence here that Chesterton was quoting or answering Warner specifically. See [Warner, *The Indeterminate Sentence*](https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/3115/pg3115-images.html), especially the passages beginning ‘An indeterminate sentence is a commitment’ and ‘Under the present enlightened opinion.’ The inspected witness is Gutenberg #3115, updated 2021; its exact first-publication date is not established by that witness.\n\nActual institutions could retain a legal ceiling. F. C. Allen’s *Hand Book of the New York State Reformatory at Elmira* (1916; inspected in the 2004 online transcription) explains that the managers chose the release date, but could not hold a prisoner beyond the statutory maximum for his offence. Release depended on their assessment of conduct, schooling, trades work and likely future behaviour. This later institutional account clarifies the distinction between discretionary release and unlimited detention; it does not establish the precise scheme Chesterton had in mind in 1908. See [Allen, ‘The Nature of Commitments’ and ‘The Release of Prisoners by Parole’](https://joycetice.com/booksc/1916ref1.htm).\n\nChesterton’s compression thus exposes a genuine transfer of judgment, but it is not a complete description of every system bearing the name. Whether Brown acts under a binding maximum, publicly stated criteria and review matters to the liberty at stake. The paragraph’s sharper claim is that the prestigious vocabulary can spare speakers from asking those questions at all.",
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      "title": "Charles Dudley Warner, The Indeterminate Sentence: What Shall Be Done with the Criminal Class?",
      "locator": "Passages beginning ‘An indeterminate sentence is a commitment’; ‘In some of the States reformatories’; ‘Under the present enlightened opinion’; ‘If he is incapable of reform’; web lines 46–52, 70–74, 82–88",
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      "title": "F. C. Allen, Hand Book of the New York State Reformatory at Elmira (1916), online transcription (2004)",
      "locator": "‘The Nature of Commitments’; ‘State, or Indefinitely Sentenced Prisoners’; ‘The Release of Prisoners by Parole’; web lines 73–84",
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    "Warner is a documented comparison, not an identified direct target.",
    "The exact first-publication date of Warner’s essay remains unverified.",
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        "approach": "Interlocutors and historical debates",
        "question": "What penal proposal does the indeterminate sentence name, and does the Jones/Brown translation fairly expose its allocation of power?"
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        "approach": "Connections across Chesterton’s works",
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